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 Rap!! Look ;D and rate LANGUAGEEEE !!! (WARNING)

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PostSubject: Rap!! Look ;D and rate LANGUAGEEEE !!! (WARNING)   Sat Jul 04, 2009 7:00 am

Hey guyss i was really bored one day so i started writing a rap song (and no i do not planing on being a rapper or "gangsta") tell me what you think of it Very Happy

Its not complete yet though only first verse and chorus done Very Happy





Title-Demonic leaves





(verse 1)





I think of the game as it is right nao

garbage is the word to describe it

and as much as i'd liek to fight it

It'll never be the same its just
bullshit


My albums were the greatest, classics
just fantastic


and now i sit bck wit this needle in my
arm


wit these demonic leaves lit

realising tht life realli is a innapropiate

the older i grow the more mistakes i
make


they say with age comes wisdom

but to me dope has jst become religion

Im trapped in this devilish prism

and even if i end up in prison


I will not stop cuz as soon as i got a
whiff of it


i just couldnt quit it became my
cocaine


first i just wanted a lil bit

but my addiction grew and i jst couldnt
stop


it slowly killed my career but still

i wasnt able to stop, this shytt was jst
ill


rehab after rehab i felt like crap

it was set and i just fell for this
trap


but i know its all good cuz ill come
bck


fellin like the incredible hulk

wit a broken bck but still able to walk

and even if I fall i'll get right bck
up


like a man cuz i'll always have the
support of my fans


and thts the shytt tht stops me from
givin in completely


to these deadly green leaves even
though...






Chorus





my lifes been fucked up

rest of my career is done

my future is gone

and even though my fans beleive

i'll quit this shytt in the end i might
just deceive


cuz i just love these demonic leaves
(x2)

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PostSubject: Re: Rap!! Look ;D and rate LANGUAGEEEE !!! (WARNING)   Sat Jul 04, 2009 7:51 am

Wow these are actually pretty good lyrics, I would listen to this song if you ever made it. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Rap!! Look ;D and rate LANGUAGEEEE !!! (WARNING)   Sat Jul 04, 2009 7:54 am

Crush Card wrote:
Wow these are actually pretty good lyrics, I would listen to this song if you ever made it. Very Happy


hehe thank you of ever recording it i prolly wouldn't do tht I could i have the voice for it I've performed songs in front of many people many times but just too lazy:D
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PostSubject: Re: Rap!! Look ;D and rate LANGUAGEEEE !!! (WARNING)   Sat Jul 04, 2009 7:57 am

Well then don't post good songs online unless your ever going make them. Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Rap!! Look ;D and rate LANGUAGEEEE !!! (WARNING)   Sat Jul 04, 2009 8:02 am

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Well then don't post good songs online unless your ever going make them. Razz


Well thought i'd share the song I guess I will record it but not right now maybe i'll just sell it I have bout 36 songs written this was jst the newest hehe thoguth i'd share what i wrote good response so far

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PostSubject: Re: Rap!! Look ;D and rate LANGUAGEEEE !!! (WARNING)   Sat Jul 04, 2009 8:47 am

I really like it but i cant judge a rap song without listening to its music first
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PostSubject: Re: Rap!! Look ;D and rate LANGUAGEEEE !!! (WARNING)   Sat Jul 04, 2009 10:34 am

firestorm wrote:
I really like it but i cant judge a rap song without listening to its music first


Well the thing is im just asking people to judge the lyrics their is no song to it just the lyrics i wrote

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PostSubject: Re: Rap!! Look ;D and rate LANGUAGEEEE !!! (WARNING)   Sat Jul 04, 2009 2:17 pm

Sounds good.. I'd like to hear it over some beats (any beats).

I mean. Any musician can make you a beat. So just get a beat, or get someone to play drums and someone to play bass / piano or something.. rap over it.. record. post on YT.

Or someting. Cuz you really can't completely judge just based on lyrics.

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PostSubject: Re: Rap!! Look ;D and rate LANGUAGEEEE !!! (WARNING)   Sat Jul 04, 2009 3:49 pm

Bertha wrote:
Sounds good.. I'd like to hear it over some beats (any beats).

I mean. Any musician can make you a beat. So just get a beat, or get someone to play drums and someone to play bass / piano or something.. rap over it.. record. post on YT.

Or someting. Cuz you really can't completely judge just based on lyrics.


I know! yu can judge on lyrics lmao i just want you to judge if my lyrics are good or not then maybe ina few weeks i'd put a video on youtube and show it to you guyss but thank you:D

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PostSubject: Re: Rap!! Look ;D and rate LANGUAGEEEE !!! (WARNING)   Sun Jul 05, 2009 1:24 am

Well a sweet song. I think I will reconstruct it a little and play it with my gang xD

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PostSubject: Re: Rap!! Look ;D and rate LANGUAGEEEE !!! (WARNING)   Sun Jul 05, 2009 1:30 am

syned wrote:
Well a sweet song. I think I will reconstruct it a little and play it with my gang xD


ahhaha go for it but remember to give me some credits bro

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PostSubject: Re: Rap!! Look ;D and rate LANGUAGEEEE !!! (WARNING)   Sun Jul 05, 2009 11:56 am

...I'm not a fan of rap. Sorry.

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PostSubject: Re: Rap!! Look ;D and rate LANGUAGEEEE !!! (WARNING)   Sun Jul 05, 2009 1:23 pm

Jin Kazama wrote:
...I'm not a fan of rap. Sorry.


Thank you for your completely useless reply

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PostSubject: Re: Rap!! Look ;D and rate LANGUAGEEEE !!! (WARNING)   Sun Jul 05, 2009 4:03 pm

Azaryn wrote:
Jin Kazama wrote:
...I'm not a fan of rap. Sorry.


Thank you for your completely useless reply


Well, I could have said they were terrible lyrics. I'm a singer myself. But I'm disinterested in rap.

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