Hey guyss i was really bored one day so i started writing a rap song (and no i do not planing on being a rapper or "gangsta") tell me what you think of it

Its not complete yet though only first verse and chorus done





Title-Demonic leaves





(verse 1)





I think of the game as it is right nao

garbage is the word to describe it

and as much as i'd liek to fight it

It'll never be the same its just
bullshit

My albums were the greatest, classics
just fantastic

and now i sit bck wit this needle in my
arm

wit these demonic leaves lit

realising tht life realli is a innapropiate

the older i grow the more mistakes i
make

they say with age comes wisdom

but to me dope has jst become religion

Im trapped in this devilish prism

and even if i end up in prison


I will not stop cuz as soon as i got a
whiff of it

i just couldnt quit it became my
cocaine

first i just wanted a lil bit

but my addiction grew and i jst couldnt
stop

it slowly killed my career but still

i wasnt able to stop, this shytt was jst
ill

rehab after rehab i felt like crap

it was set and i just fell for this
trap

but i know its all good cuz ill come
bck

fellin like the incredible hulk

wit a broken bck but still able to walk

and even if I fall i'll get right bck
up

like a man cuz i'll always have the
support of my fans

and thts the shytt tht stops me from
givin in completely

to these deadly green leaves even
though...





Chorus





my lifes been fucked up

rest of my career is done

my future is gone

and even though my fans beleive

i'll quit this shytt in the end i might
just deceive

cuz i just love these demonic leaves
(x2)

Wow these are actually pretty good lyrics, I would listen to this song if you ever made it.

Well then don't post good songs online unless your ever going make them.

I really like it but i cant judge a rap song without listening to its music first

Sounds good.. I'd like to hear it over some beats (any beats).

I mean. Any musician can make you a beat. So just get a beat, or get someone to play drums and someone to play bass / piano or something.. rap over it.. record. post on YT.

Or someting. Cuz you really can't completely judge just based on lyrics.

Well a sweet song. I think I will reconstruct it a little and play it with my gang xD

...I'm not a fan of rap. Sorry.